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Afternoon to y'all.

Spent the morning working on the house - living in a house my parents are renovating, and they removed the chimney, so I'm stacking bricks. Good workout, actually; I lost an inch doing it. 57'' is a horrible waistline size, but it beats the hell out of 58'': 56 and no or bust next week, here's hoping.

Applying for some jobs! Going to the farmer's market with a stack of resumes this weekend, hoping to snag a job as a cook for a prepackaged food company or as a farmhand. Wish me luck, guys.

Last weekend, spent some time with [livejournal.com profile] universal_queen, Feyna, Henry and Ben - Bliss Stage game, plus shit-shooting and dinner. Made spaghetti with pesto cream sauce - always a winner - and fried some fish, which... didn't work as well. Next time, Elli, deep fry: don't half-ass it.

And speaking of Bliss Stage - those just tuning in, I've been tapped for a fan-project, a Visual Novel for PC's (and Macs, come to that). I mentioned that I might want to post some Interludes from same, and...

Well, I still do, but I'd like to structure it as if it were a rough play-through of the game. Not at this site: I'd like it to be a little more... uh... secure. But at another site.

If you'd be interested in being part of this... shall we call it a Let's Write? Then post here, and I'll invite you to the site.

Date: 2010-04-14 08:10 pm (UTC)
chess: (Default)
From: [personal profile] chess
*waves* pick me, pick me?

Date: 2010-04-14 08:20 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-04-14 08:10 pm (UTC)
metalfatigue: A capybara looking over the edge of his swimming pool (how sweet it is to wear a Love Boat hat)
From: [personal profile] metalfatigue
Yeah, sure.

What kind of critique will you be expecting?

Date: 2010-04-14 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l-the-fangirl.livejournal.com
First off, just vote on scenes you want to see next - it's organized like an LP/playthrough of the game. I'll abstract the combat a bit, but will accept suggestions for Hotshot options (as well as point out things that are ripe for them).

Second, just - harsh-but-fair constructive criticism. Be ruthless, but be polite. Fridge logic, odd characterization, 'this character annoys me for X reason' sort of thing.
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Date: 2010-04-14 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l-the-fangirl.livejournal.com
so i herd u liek bliss stage
i liek bliss stage too

Date: 2010-04-14 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-troper.livejournal.com
I'm told I'm pretty good at giving crit. Sign me up!

Date: 2010-04-14 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l-the-fangirl.livejournal.com
For this next trick, I will need you to PM me with your e-mail address.

Date: 2010-04-14 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-troper.livejournal.com
Sure thing. You want me to give you my personal one or my recreational one?

Date: 2010-04-14 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-troper.livejournal.com
On zee way~

Go on, then

Date: 2010-04-16 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenewman.livejournal.com
*Sniff, sniff*. Hmm. I smell an opportunity to be massively pedantic about grammar *and be thanked for it!*

So yeah, sign me up.

On the other hand, you know what I'm like with follow-through (joining that LJ group for example. Yeah, that *really* happened.) Still, I'll try.

Re: Go on, then

Date: 2010-04-16 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] l-the-fangirl.livejournal.com
I smell an opportunity to be massively pedantic about grammar and be thanked for it!

This. But expect a lot of STET because Josh don't freaking care 'bout Strunk and White.


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